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(6) She pushed her way past him, running for the kitchen.

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She grabbed a butcher knife from the kitchen and approached him from behind.

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( He batted the knife aside and said, "Don't make trouble for yourself when all we want to know is the whereabouts of your husband Dick!"

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9)She cried out that all she knew is that he went out with his brother Willy

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10.  Desperate, she saw no other option than to use her feminine wiles to distract him....after all, she was a highly desirable woman.

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11. As she smiled at him seductively she saw, to her horror, Dick's brother Willy coming up the front walk, looking agitated.

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(12). She thought 'it's never a good sign when Willy is over- agitated'.

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13.  Willy barged his way into the house, collapsed on the sofa and began sobbing, mumbling gibberish about Dick.

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14) something about "Dick taking a loan out."

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(15) Mrs. Sheepsbottom, whose first name was Fuzzie, dropped the butcher knife in alarm when she saw her husband, Dick, desperately gesturing at her through the kitchen window, loan papers in one hand.  He had something in the other hand but she was unable to make out what it was.

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(15) Mrs. Sheepsbottom, whose first name was Fuzzie, dropped the butcher knife in alarm when she saw her husband, Dick, desperately gesturing at her through the kitchen window, loan papers in one hand.  He had something in the other hand but she was unable to make out what it was.

 

You're on a roll, Chal!

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(16) Will reaches for his shuriken, and throws it at Mrs. Sheepsbottom with a full force. It hits her in the neck, and she collapses to the floor from pain.

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That was an amazing story - great thread, Gillyblossom. Had me on the edge of my "seat" - well in bed actually!!

 

Hugs

 

Fiona 

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Thanks very much Fiona! And a fellow author yourself! Let's start another one. This time we are limiting it to twenty, no more and no less. And I am sorry that I didn't number some of my posts.This is compulsory, folks. It is very important that it should be starting to pull together from about sentence 15.

 

PLEASE READ THE ABOVE!!!

 

Okay, third time lucky!

 

(1).  Little Billy loved splashing in the puddles in his nearby park.

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(2) One day he noticed a strangely dressed man getting off the bus, heading his way though the park.

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(3) He didn't like the look of the man because he knew his mum had warned him about strangers.

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(4) There soon appeared lots of other strangely dressed men.

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(5) Billy was uneasy and hid behind some bushes, waiting to see what the men would do.

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(6) That's when Billy noticed a very short man with a balalaika and a chicken on a leash.

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7) billy became frightened, as he had seen this man before, hanging around his house at odd hours of the night.

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      He tried to run away, but the chicken saw him and started squawking.

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Billy knew his cover was blown.

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(10)  The chicken escaped and began to chase Billy, pecking at his ankles as he ran away

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(11) Billy ran into the street and turned the corner as the chicken was chasing him, only to find another chicken awaiting him.

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12) billy froze, as he not only was cornered by two chickens, he saw the strange man running down the sidewalk towards him.